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Tooly's avatar

Anyone who takes pause and looks around will experience what you so eloquently describe.

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Zachary Bartles's avatar

“a capillary bloom

of wet, red leaves

imprinting haze”

These lines are impressionistic in the best way. The haze “too thin to be fog” is like the scumbling behind the leaves’ edges. Because there is a haze to imprint at all, the edges sharpen.

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