a new poem
Lovely, Joseph. It’s a haiku.
Funny I just now realize this.
The format was never as important
As the vivid images and their
Deeper message.
Mind blown:
I live within
windows, think into
their vision.
Beautiful poem.
Helping others find the sacred. Thanks JM.
Woke up and had this to read this morning. Thank you!
I love this one so much!
“Lord, don’t let them close”🥹🙏🙌
I love your haiku format in your poems.
The closing stanza is very good.
Amazing read 🍁
Lovely Joseph
Here’s my autumn poem of love!
https://substack.com/@paulwbmarsden/note/c-170046567?r=206izj&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
Lovely, Joseph. It’s a haiku.
Funny I just now realize this.
The format was never as important
As the vivid images and their
Deeper message.
Mind blown:
I live within
windows, think into
their vision.
Beautiful poem.
Helping others find the sacred. Thanks JM.
Woke up and had this to read this morning. Thank you!
I love this one so much!
“Lord, don’t let them close”🥹🙏🙌
I love your haiku format in your poems.
The closing stanza is very good.
Amazing read 🍁
Lovely Joseph
Here’s my autumn poem of love!
https://substack.com/@paulwbmarsden/note/c-170046567?r=206izj&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action