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Alicia Meer's avatar

"Bright beyond alarm" .... soo good.

Jan in NW FL's avatar

Joseph, your work is very touching. You often comment about feeling depressed or alienated or whatever. I may be overreacting, but you are really touching a lot of people. You should remember that. It’s a great accomplishment.

Isabel Chenot's avatar

"sLant Light sLices cLean" -- quintessentially something you do to such good effect. Something about those 'L's goes sheer through the mind.

Bob Mooney's avatar

You're doing such wonderful work concerning my favorite month.

Angela Fischetti's avatar

I'm left speechless...thinking. Thank you.

Rachael Denny's avatar

Well done!

Abigail's avatar

I cannot even walk across the grocery store parking lot without composing a haiku to the slanted light. It seems remarkable this October.

Paula's avatar

This feels crisp and clear like one of those unforgettable October blue-sky days.

Taylor D'Amico's avatar

Love this! (I wish it ended at "side".) It's so interesting to read bright against shadow--a light on each side of the veil.