"Silence abides silence" reminded me of the hymn, " Abide With Me", and the line, "Abide with me, fast falls the eventide". Beautiful poem, profound sentiment.
The “shadows… / over uneven ground” is such an advanced technique. And that’s what makes you a poet. That you used the word “uneven,” here, in this way. I’d have to write multiple paragraphs to explain why I think it’s a perfect choice, so instead I’ll just say bravo.
"I sit
with the stones
until silence
abides silence."
"Silence abides silence" reminded me of the hymn, " Abide With Me", and the line, "Abide with me, fast falls the eventide". Beautiful poem, profound sentiment.
Thank you
Beautiful
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The “shadows… / over uneven ground” is such an advanced technique. And that’s what makes you a poet. That you used the word “uneven,” here, in this way. I’d have to write multiple paragraphs to explain why I think it’s a perfect choice, so instead I’ll just say bravo.
Gorgeous cemeteries
Noble with stones
Marking achievements
Unending returns
Stories that answer
The question of kids
What lies beyond
Past the life end’s abyss?