This Far In
Winter left a dent in me
filling up and spilling over 
with manic bird clatter. Cold 
April morning: light lances
through bedroom curtains
and casts an arrowhead
bright across the dark wood floor.
Gray, abbreviated days 
accumulated, and left 
a dent in me, a hollow 
space for morning’s discord
to echo and loop.
How the heart chafes against it:
the vacillations of spring—
from false to freezing. 
There’s ice
in the forecast tonight, but
something of the morning remains— 
mind and heart and body cling 
to what I won’t mistake for 
song. The manic clatter
of waking creatures. 
And the river’s last slab of ice 
cracking and snapping off 
into the drift.
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I feel like winter leaves a dent in all of us. :)
Ooooh, I like the action here, the oenomatipeaia (sp???) You know, the sound words. The snapping of ice. The CLATTER of birds! Not only can I see what's going on. I can hear it.