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Intra-Stellar's avatar

“notice the sun

as it descends, how it sheds

this sacred, deepening red”

Love this. Beautiful.

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Lisa Jensen's avatar

“To speak clearly into the dark” - beautiful!

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Brandon Howe's avatar

“How it sheds this sacred, deepening red”.

Man.

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Nathan's avatar

Stunning poem, sir.

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Jed Moffitt's avatar

"In the middle of

the night, all that will suffice

is poetry—to

speak clearly into the dark—

a lantern for company."

Speaks to the practice of listening to my mind more clearly when I awaken at 4 AM in the dark, like I just did. Some mornings it runs calmer than others. Some mornings the poetry is a little chaotic.

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M.E. Stahl's avatar

I can’t agree with you more about poetry, it has gotten me through many long nights, early mornings, and hard days. You have expressed that sentiment beautifully in this poem.

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Beautiful images. The sacred red of a winter sunset ... or dawn, for that matter. The soft flakes "sparking" past the lamplight.

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Sally Newland's avatar

I so look forward to every poem that you post, Joseph. This one is gorgeous. Thanks.

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Rosa Gilbert's avatar

Beautiful as always!

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you, Rosa!

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Charles Gilmore, Jr.'s avatar

Love the photo & the poem. Thanks!

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Isabel Chenot's avatar

There is so much in these, but I so especially love the description of snow as a veil of "soft sparks".

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you, Isabel!

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Grace Drigo's avatar

Such a lovely poem and photo - warms my heart on a cold winter’s night 🩵

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you!

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AliProf's avatar

Thank you for this enchanting reminder of the sacred whisper that permeates our daily spaces. The lovely photo brings back such wonderful memories of growing up in Wisconsin. Have a joyous & blessing-filled Christmas! 🎄

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Chad R Herman's avatar

I love this. What a nice poem. Its so simple and concise.

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