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Paul Bullard's avatar

These were fun to read out loud (aka just under my breath where I can hear the sounds, since I’m in public). The lines about poets breathing were genius for the breath-sounding flow of words. Love this!

Joseph Massey's avatar

Thanks, Paul!

Linda Campbell's avatar

Gorgeous!!!😊

Lis's avatar

"...forests primordial..." brought back memories. Made me think of my high school English teacher, introducing my class to Evangeline (and the forest primeval). These are beautiful, Joseph. I especially like that last one.

Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you šŸ™šŸ»