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Oh, ya bastard! Where do you get off with "rowing"?! An odd and beautiful verb to describe geese in flight. Bravo!

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love this. Language makes me pay attention!

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short but just enough. thank you!

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Lovely

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I really love this sort of quiet poem. Reminds me of "plashless in the sky."

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I love this. I love hearing them overhead as they make their way South in the fall.

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I can see it now!

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Exactly!

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❣️

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Oh my. I feel better now. :)

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Perfect

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nice poem

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I love when people use language as it's supposed to be. This poem is small and says so much. It's like you're in the V with them.

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Short , yet so much

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I’m not questioning your experience, but I’m still struggling to imagine silent geese.

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