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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Oh, ya bastard! Where do you get off with "rowing"?! An odd and beautiful verb to describe geese in flight. Bravo!

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nancy knox-bierman's avatar

short but just enough. thank you!

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Laurie White's avatar

love this. Language makes me pay attention!

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Wei Tam's avatar

Lovely

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

I really love this sort of quiet poem. Reminds me of "plashless in the sky."

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Kathy Lux's avatar

I love this. I love hearing them overhead as they make their way South in the fall.

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Ethel Louise's avatar

I can see it now!

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Melissa Terry's avatar

Exactly!

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

❣️

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Diane Kern's avatar

Oh my. I feel better now. :)

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Janice LeCocq's avatar

Perfect

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Corie Feiner's avatar

Oh, nice.

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Vince Roman's avatar

Two different colors on the map

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Roger Scott's avatar

nice poem

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Chad R Herman's avatar

I love when people use language as it's supposed to be. This poem is small and says so much. It's like you're in the V with them.

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Mr. Lob's avatar

Short , yet so much

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