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Kristine Amundrud's avatar

Really enjoyed this today! Spoke to my heart. Thank you 🙌

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Poetry and Miracles's avatar

Gorgeous.

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Patris's avatar

“The sound of snow falling through snow” leaves me listening for it. Wonderful imagery, beautiful really..

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Michela Griffith's avatar

There’s so much to linger over with this. Thank you Joseph.

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Joseph Massey's avatar

You’re quite welcome!

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Isabel Chenot's avatar

Wow, that image of the geese drawn to a point and puncturing dull, blind grey ... and the coda gave me chills -- 'honed by cold and held in mind' -- somehow has that thin sound of snow falling through snow. Thank you.

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Mason Pashia's avatar

"how they form

a body—head gone in song"

and

" snow

falling through snow a voice thin with prayer

and winter"

are beautiful! Thanks for writing :)

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