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Kristine Amundrud's avatar

Really enjoyed this today! Spoke to my heart. Thank you 🙌

Poetry and Miracles's avatar

Gorgeous.

Patris's avatar

“The sound of snow falling through snow” leaves me listening for it. Wonderful imagery, beautiful really..

Michela Griffith's avatar

There’s so much to linger over with this. Thank you Joseph.

Joseph Massey's avatar

You’re quite welcome!

Isabel Chenot's avatar

Wow, that image of the geese drawn to a point and puncturing dull, blind grey ... and the coda gave me chills -- 'honed by cold and held in mind' -- somehow has that thin sound of snow falling through snow. Thank you.

Mason Pashia's avatar

"how they form

a body—head gone in song"

and

" snow

falling through snow a voice thin with prayer

and winter"

are beautiful! Thanks for writing :)