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Robin's avatar

“thunder tumbles up my spine,

lodging in my throat”

Paula's avatar

"Thunder tumbles up my spine"

Love this.

Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you so much for reading it.

Angie Renee's avatar

🙏It was a pleasure to sit

and read your poem and allow the words to keep me still.

Janice LeCocq's avatar

I really like this one….the imagery is very strong…I feel it…and I often share it.

Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

“a prayer tied

to my tongue.”

What a great line!

Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻

Sue Cauhape's avatar

"...to wring myself into the present." That describes perfectly the struggle to relinquish the dreams for the realities. Thank you, Joseph.

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻