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Robin's avatar

“thunder tumbles up my spine,

lodging in my throat”

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Paula S.'s avatar

"Thunder tumbles up my spine"

Love this.

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you so much for reading it.

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Angie Renee's avatar

🙏It was a pleasure to sit

and read your poem and allow the words to keep me still.

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Janice LeCocq's avatar

I really like this one….the imagery is very strong…I feel it…and I often share it.

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Many thanks.

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

“a prayer tied

to my tongue.”

What a great line!

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Joseph Massey's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

"...to wring myself into the present." That describes perfectly the struggle to relinquish the dreams for the realities. Thank you, Joseph.

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