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AliProf's avatar

Profound, beautiful, and much-needed call to think on eternal things that will remain steadfast as everything in our society seems to pull us toward the superficial & divisive. Thank you—I needed this reminder today!

Lia's avatar

I don't like reading poetry on my phone, it's just not the right place, but this is gorgeous.

Janice LeCocq's avatar

Beautiful

David Donoghue's avatar

I got really pulled into this. Your description is quite engaging! Thanks for sharing this.

Steve McKennon's avatar

Such beautiful imagery and so many great lines, but I particularly loved the mental picture "the window

an altar

for my eyes." gave me... That is such a wonderful way to present that.

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Lovely images. warped view of a tree still heavy with leaves, a flame flaring out.

Monica P.'s avatar

Brings me memories that f growing up in the Midwest. I loved the fall leaves, the apple orchards and the crispness in the air. Thank you for stirring up these memories for me.

Fr Ryan Sliwa's avatar

Catching up on past posts. ‘All Souls’ prompts me to say that, certainly among other things, you’re a poet of stillness. Deep stillness. And alive in the bright page, indeed.

Sally Newland's avatar

The art of seeing is so important in this poetry! A simple blessing that most of us use only fitfully.

Thanks, Joseph, for this beautiful poem.

Victory Palace Poetry's avatar

Beautiful evocation of autumn, my favorite time of year.