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Abigail's avatar

I keep rereading it trying to pick which line is my favorite. I love them all.

Angela Fischetti's avatar

I agree! This one's a beauty! Thank you, Joseph!

Lis's avatar

What a beautiful way to start the day. Thank you, Joseph.

Dave Mead's avatar

Fabulous poem Joseph, thank you for sharing.

Arthur Powers's avatar

This is an excellent poem - well constructed. It's one of those rare poems that I think "I wish I could have written that one." Well done!

lou J's avatar

Thank you. Delightful. Makes me realize I need to transform a few recent experiences.

Bonnie J. Toomey's avatar

It isn’t pointless

But the point remains beyond us

True, and nice play on sound and rhythm.

Rachael Denny's avatar

Lovely...

Robin's avatar

You inspire me

Tooly's avatar

I opened up the email, read your poem aloud (without a word stumble), and it is beautiful! "All our senses swarmed by green contortions of waking earth." Get.Out.Of.Town....brilliant!

Laura's avatar

Mm these are beautiful connections.

Blake Nelson's avatar

American Poet Laureate level stuff.

Callahan Gobble's avatar

Gorgeous. I love how it unfurls to that stellar ending.

Rebecca's avatar

I really enjoy the sounds in this poem. Thank you!

Alex Valentine's avatar

You hit something existential here--great piece.

Karen  Harvey's avatar

One I will come back to again. It’s lovely.

Korie's avatar

Exceptional!