I love the reflections of sound from line to line ... and the echoes of Revelation: the sea of glass around the throne, and the cry "how long" -- so apt for that diamond shape turning before the inner-eye.
Had a similar experience of disintegrating the other day on my back patio with my neighbor's cat. It made me think of your cat. My wife is allergic so we can't have a cat inside, so I savor the moments when our neighbor's cat visits. Thank you for sharing your work!
This makes me appreciate these final days of summer and look forward to the beginning of autumn.
I love the reflections of sound from line to line ... and the echoes of Revelation: the sea of glass around the throne, and the cry "how long" -- so apt for that diamond shape turning before the inner-eye.
Had a similar experience of disintegrating the other day on my back patio with my neighbor's cat. It made me think of your cat. My wife is allergic so we can't have a cat inside, so I savor the moments when our neighbor's cat visits. Thank you for sharing your work!
"Syllables sculpting air into a shape" is an amazing line.
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Absolutely beautiful
You‘re wonderful at imagery — both with photography and words. Love the last lines…and how long now, the heat.
A poem that speaks to me with joy.
Beautiful summer poem. 💚
Love this poem! I can visualize every word. The photo is fabulous too❤️ Thank you for sharing!
I am sitting there. Beautiful prose.
I like it!
WOW.