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Fr Ryan Sliwa's avatar

"New England . . . is a condition / . . . whose electricity / is brickish or made into / T beams--They dangle them / on wire cables . . ." [Williams.]

mary's avatar

I like "night absorbs the form"

Sara Morin's avatar

Another beautiful poem - the image and the poem both full of feeling.

Sherman Alexie's avatar

Yes, that rattle in the field. I know that noise.

David Fogarty's avatar

Your poetry is simple and cute;I like it!