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Jackson Houser's avatar

A better set of syllables than haiku I think.

I'm not a poet; lunes are new to me. Thank you both.

Isabel Chenot's avatar

Such beautiful condensations of sound and conjured atmospheres.

Lucy's avatar

These are so vivid and beautiful.

Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

A beautiful collection. I especially like:

ragged nests, hidden

in spring, now

exposed to sunset

.and

winter tree shadows—

white tiger

asleep in the woods

and

side mirror: watch birds

warp and woof

somewhere behind you

(a fellow UD alumna, also living in New England)

LeeAnn Pickrell's avatar

I’m inspired to try a lune. These are lovely.