Unreal Season: 20 Lunes
A better set of syllables than haiku I think.
I'm not a poet; lunes are new to me. Thank you both.
Such beautiful condensations of sound and conjured atmospheres.
These are so vivid and beautiful.
A beautiful collection. I especially like:
ragged nests, hidden
in spring, now
exposed to sunset
.and
winter tree shadows—
white tiger
asleep in the woods
and
side mirror: watch birds
warp and woof
somewhere behind you
(a fellow UD alumna, also living in New England)
I’m inspired to try a lune. These are lovely.
A better set of syllables than haiku I think.
I'm not a poet; lunes are new to me. Thank you both.
Such beautiful condensations of sound and conjured atmospheres.
These are so vivid and beautiful.
A beautiful collection. I especially like:
ragged nests, hidden
in spring, now
exposed to sunset
.and
winter tree shadows—
white tiger
asleep in the woods
and
side mirror: watch birds
warp and woof
somewhere behind you
(a fellow UD alumna, also living in New England)
I’m inspired to try a lune. These are lovely.