"First Sign"
Beautiful. I love the way you are alert to “the details” and draw such loving musings from them.
This is so beautiful. I love those first signs of fall and how the light shifts. This poem captures this so well.
Wow! Beautiful writing
'And isn’t it a prayer,
to notice
what’s noticed?
The prayer,
the practice, the way
one walks through
an unimagined world' .
You've somehow distilled and expanded it at the same time. So incredibly artful.
Your imagery invokes the season upon us.
Breathtaking 💚
Lovely!!
Thanks for helping readers to notice the forms of “unimagined” glory we so often miss in our strained lives.
These words, a string of prayer beads. Thank you Joseph.
Stunning. 🙏🏼
You’ve evoked the watery shadowy and then blazing atmosphere of this odd season. I like the way you’ve connected the stanzas with word.
Beautiful. I love the way you are alert to “the details” and draw such loving musings from them.
This is so beautiful. I love those first signs of fall and how the light shifts. This poem captures this so well.
Wow! Beautiful writing
'And isn’t it a prayer,
to notice
what’s noticed?
The prayer,
the practice, the way
one walks through
an unimagined world' .
You've somehow distilled and expanded it at the same time. So incredibly artful.
Your imagery invokes the season upon us.
Breathtaking 💚
Lovely!!
Thanks for helping readers to notice the forms of “unimagined” glory we so often miss in our strained lives.
These words, a string of prayer beads. Thank you Joseph.
Stunning. 🙏🏼
You’ve evoked the watery shadowy and then blazing atmosphere of this odd season. I like the way you’ve connected the stanzas with word.