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Janice LeCocq's avatar

Love it! Might try my own.

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Sage Taylor Kingsley's avatar

Very cool! What’s the form called?

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Joseph Massey's avatar

He didn’t name it.

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Matthew Robb Brown's avatar

I love this form! This is how I wrote a short piece this afternoon and then revised it to fit the form. 3 syllables for the Holy Trinity, 7 lines the divine number. How elegant the form is! Thanks for sharing. I’m reading your Decades collection now with great enjoyment:

The dogwood tree out front

Is a master of making autumn last.

Its leaves begin to gather deep red streaks in August, while it yet clings a few crimson tinted leaves close in mid November.

A dogwood

Tree out front

Makes autumn

last. Red in

August; a

Few leaves still:

November.

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Arne's avatar

"It's snowing" fits into this form.

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