Dang it! This is one of the poems where I say EFF YOU right at you for being so damn good. That “untangle” verb is perfect. I need a verb for one of my poems and I realize it should be “tangle” because of your poem. Again, EFF YOU for writing this gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous poem. Ha!
Yes! Love untangle here. I remember toying with the line "the tree that locked the earth to the sky" once. "Wait, the wind..." is also a lovely opening. Good stuff!
Dang it! This is one of the poems where I say EFF YOU right at you for being so damn good. That “untangle” verb is perfect. I need a verb for one of my poems and I realize it should be “tangle” because of your poem. Again, EFF YOU for writing this gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous poem. Ha!
Hahaha. Thank you, Sherman!
Yes! Love untangle here. I remember toying with the line "the tree that locked the earth to the sky" once. "Wait, the wind..." is also a lovely opening. Good stuff!