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Wei Tam's avatar

Great poem. JDP is one of my favorite compilations.

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Larisa Rimerman's avatar

Lovely poem. Loved the image of "frost moon" and "clean night air/ will absolve me of my sin.

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sonja ringo's avatar

I’m so happy I stumbled upon your page just now… lovely poem

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Love Hoffmann's book! And your poem is a stunner. Bravo Joseph!

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Patris's avatar

Beautiful

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

Beautiful!

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

Beautiful sound work.

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small victories's avatar

Such music in shattering racket. Beautiful write.

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Poetry By Ericajean's avatar

This was beautifully written🖤 Tuttle has a book called Japanese Death Poems that I purchased recently. I can’t wait to dive into it. It’s written by Zen Monks and Haiku poets on the verge of death.

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Philip Costea's avatar

I hear you. Enough with all that racket.

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Mishtu's avatar

Issa smiled

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