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Great poem. JDP is one of my favorite compilations.

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Lovely poem. Loved the image of "frost moon" and "clean night air/ will absolve me of my sin.

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I’m so happy I stumbled upon your page just now… lovely poem

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Love Hoffmann's book! And your poem is a stunner. Bravo Joseph!

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Beautiful

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Beautiful!

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Beautiful sound work.

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Such music in shattering racket. Beautiful write.

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This was beautifully written🖤 Tuttle has a book called Japanese Death Poems that I purchased recently. I can’t wait to dive into it. It’s written by Zen Monks and Haiku poets on the verge of death.

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I hear you. Enough with all that racket.

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Issa smiled

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