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Jennifer J. Camp's avatar

This is so gorgeous. The smoothness of it all, the gentle watching you let me do.

Mark Rico's avatar

"How morning expands

the window

beyond itself, as

if the glass

were light and the frame

a thing blown

into the margins."

Just beautiful.

Elizabeth Crews's avatar

“Phantom pain in place of human touch…” Brilliant, thank you.

Melissa Terry's avatar

Such a privilege to end the day with beauty.

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Thank you for this new poem form.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

These are just lovely, Joseph

Ryan's avatar

What a gift! To explain a poetic style and then write such a wonderful representation and then you shared it with us all. 🎁

Clifton D Healy's avatar

Thank. I learned a new poetic form. Thank you sharing such excellent and moving poetry.

Sherman Alexie's avatar

Damn it, Joseph! I'm gonna steal that "re/lentless" line break!