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Jennifer J. Camp's avatar

This is so gorgeous. The smoothness of it all, the gentle watching you let me do.

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Mark Rico's avatar

"How morning expands

the window

beyond itself, as

if the glass

were light and the frame

a thing blown

into the margins."

Just beautiful.

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Elizabeth Crews's avatar

“Phantom pain in place of human touch…” Brilliant, thank you.

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Melissa Terry's avatar

Such a privilege to end the day with beauty.

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Thank you for this new poem form.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

These are just lovely, Joseph

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Ryan's avatar

What a gift! To explain a poetic style and then write such a wonderful representation and then you shared it with us all. 🎁

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MK Creel's avatar

beautiful

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Conny Borgelioen's avatar

These are perfect for summer. I love the vivid imagery.

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Clifton D Healy's avatar

Thank. I learned a new poetic form. Thank you sharing such excellent and moving poetry.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Damn it, Joseph! I'm gonna steal that "re/lentless" line break!

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